Vinita

It was bright and beautiful morning. Vinita entered the office building hurridly. ’Why do I get late for crucial meetings’ she thought.

As she moved towards the elevator, she prayed to have not been too late.

Luckily for her, the interviews were running late and her name had not been called out. She looked around at her competition.

Three very beautiful girls stared back at her.

‘Am I the only one who is not size 0 here’ Vinita wondered.

With in no time her name was called.

The office where interviews were conducted was large and spacious.

Three men and two women greeted her.

She knew that behaving in cool fashion was imperative but one of those men was Satish!

She stupidly started at him.

He looked at her unblinkingly with that hint of smirk, she knew he was hiding.

Vinita took the seat and proceeded with the greetings.

She was pretty upset that he was interviewing her and was wondering if she should mention it to others.

As if reading her mind. Satish stood up. He told the board of directors, ‘I know her personally. I am sorry to not have looked through the list of candidates previously. I would like to take leave from this interview session.’

He smiled at Vinita , shook her hands and left.

Vinita was relieved and ashamed at the same time.

She felt the way she had treated him last time they had met was disgraceful.

She felt lucky that her bad karma did not come back to bite in her butt.

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My first attempt at story writing. Who is Vinita? Who is Satish? What job was she applying for? What bad karma?

Is the story interesting enough? let me know…

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9 Responses to Vinita

  1. mary taitt says:

    This is a VERY good start to a story. It piques the readers curiosity to know more–very good.

  2. Nairobi says:

    Yes shraddha,i can’t hold my curiosity now!
    Good going at the story writing btw :)

  3. annie says:

    The foundation here is well-laid. The observation about size sets the scene. In a few short sentences we learn of her nervousness, insecurity,and discovery that not all is as it seems as Satish excuses himself from the interview. Nice start. I’m ready for more.

  4. Jeeves says:

    Interesting….continue…continue

  5. Prats says:

    I am definitely waiting to know .. more please .. soon please ;)

  6. Swaram says:

    Oops! I wanna read the next part soon pls pls plssss .. wonderful start!

  7. Jaymie says:

    Please continue with the story…I was pulled in, I could relate and wanted to know to what extent.

  8. Titaxy says:

    v v nice, Shraddha..when’s the next part gonna be published?

  9. aniruddha says:

    shradha nice build up..it is interesting yes..i would like to read more of the story